Project 1: Investigative Field Essay

My revision of this paper includes a more clear description of how college students need to be aware of their health. I make sure to fix any grammar mistakes as well as make the overall paper flow. I noticed that I wrote very rushed and in not as much detail as I wanted. I added more insight on my evidence and more examples of how students can get professional help on campus. Compared to when I originally wrote this paper I now have the skills to make it more profound and easier to understand.